Wednesday, 8 October 2014

Developed Narrative Structure

Main Character - young girl (12/13), abused by parents

Storyline (in progress)

  • girl is crying in her bedroom looking at pictures from her childhood when she was happy, we then see a comparison to drawings she has done of herself and her parents now, her interpretation of what is happening to her.
  • realisation of the situation she is in occurs.
  • she finds/steals the landline/mobile phone and looks in yellow page or some type of leaflet to find a helpline number, (e.g childline)
  • becomes scared of what might happen, dogs ears the page and leaves the phone
  • she leaves the house to think about what to do, she goes for a walk - some possible locations include fields and the park.
  • At the park she sees a happy family, she is sad that her family does not have this dynamic.
  • When she gets home she runs to her room, she finds the book, opens the page and rings the line.
  • When the song ends I would have diegetic sound of the young girl saying 'hello'? to the person on the line.

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